Writing Term 1
WALT write a recount about something that has already happened.
I went fishing. After that I went to a cafe and I looked at a pigeon house. When I looked back there was a little dog and its owner told me its name. It's name is Coco and it really likes me. After that I saw some stones. I followed them and there were ponies. I ran up to the fence and I climbed up. A pony ran up to me and I got to pat it! The owner let me and my sister and my cousin Macey and my Dad eat a type of fruit. You squash it then you eat it!
I went fishing. After that I went to a cafe and I looked at a pigeon house. When I looked back there was a little dog and its owner told me its name. It's name is Coco and it really likes me. After that I saw some stones. I followed them and there were ponies. I ran up to the fence and I climbed up. A pony ran up to me and I got to pat it! The owner let me and my sister and my cousin Macey and my Dad eat a type of fruit. You squash it then you eat it!
Student Voice - " I have written about something I did that has already happened".
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